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Wednesday, February 6, 2013

without dreams


following the stars

that brought me here 

beckoning 
 sleep now
there's nothing more to do

than trace the paths of glory and defeat

both gained and lost 

and listen to the music of the stars

feeling a symphony all its own

 but

 if i should go to orion

to leave my earthly world to another orb

then at least
i know i have soared through the night
and touched all i could feel
like being wrapped in moonglow
and fantasy and shining wonder
believing in tomorrow's brighter hue

~ ~ ~
without dreams
the weight of life
is heavy

12 thoughts:

Rebecca said...

I do love the way this flows. I think of a dark night with the sky covered in beautiful stars and moon. Such serenity and peace. And although I understand how dreams can take us away from our troubles and the pain of life, I don't care for them as much. I guess maybe because my dreams are often unpleasant. You may not be speaking of dreams in the literal sense, but even so... I have a hard time going there.

I wish I could reach out like you do. You certainly know what it means to relieve the heaviness of life. I have yet to find that balance. Maybe some day.

Such a refined and elegant write, as always.

Peter said...

you overrate me, and my "balance", but thank you as usual. :)

Rebecca said...

You know, Peter, I'd like to think I gauge you pretty well. I don't overrate people, especially not you or your poetry. You're amazing, so just accept it.

As far as your balance, I think it's the years you have on me. =D

And you're welcome, always.

Peter said...

it's true, i'm amazingly old.

Rebecca said...

You're amazingly impossible.

Optimistic Existentialist said...

Great poem sir!!

Peter said...

why thank you. this isn't the army though, no sir eee(k)

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Anonymous said...

utterly romantic and sensual.
helplessly waiting...adoring the
wait.

very well written, indeed. x

Peter said...

even better comment than anonymous :) thank you!