she enters his eyes through her eyes
penetrating the shell of loneliness
she enters his heart through her heart
saying, “yes, that’s right”
his once gone-cold body
is warmed and inflamed
by the fill of her
so that every time he draws a breath
she draws a breath
and whispers through him,
“yes that’s right, so very right”
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9 thoughts:
There is something about this poem that is so very warm and brings a tenderness to the soul. How lucky to have someone break that shell of loneliness and bring you such comfort with a breath of new life. Quite a stunning write. It leaves me wanting more. What happens next? Do tell.
Look what I found! "Poems by Peter". How I got here, must have been god working somewhere in the back, as god always is back there...working.
I just looked at "Veils of Rapture", who commented above--your coloring is very alike. But I can read hers better. Yours is very difficult for an old guy. Would it be rude to ask you to lighten the font just a little?
Peter, I really REALLY love your writing, for the essence of all this is to communicate my (and your) thoughts in a way which lifts my mind and heart above the fray of "Google earth"--grin!
Your posts (what I have read so far) are brief thoughts, exquisitely sent out to the world in words understandable. AND I do not need all afternoon to read one--then try to figure out "What does he mean by that?"
If I have not conveyed this yet, I wish to tell you now, I thank SO much whoever sent me here to see you, eventually to "know" you.
Peace!
Steve
I plan to link you in a brief--grin! introductory paragraph at top of my post tonight or tomorrow, whichever...
OK?
I'm here via Steveroni's blog and I'm glad I clicked the link.
This is probably one of the most romantic poems I've ever read. I'll be back.
steveroni sent me over...glad he did...you convey much in little...i like that...
As the others,
Steve is so right though!
Nice to meet you!
Dulce
beautiful,
you got me in instantly!
Lovely post. Thanks for sharing. Heartspell
Wow! Stunning, tender, joyous and reason for celebration. I relate with these words so easily. Thanks for sharing! I truly enjoy reading what you put here!
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