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Tuesday, June 15, 2010

as you are

as you are, you
are you, no one else
comes to me
as you are
no more, no less
just as you are, you
are you

6 thoughts:

izzy said...

echo- indeed-

sometimes I sidestep
the footprint
sometimes I stand to be seen

I just wrote about

dipping in and out
sun to shade
rock and river,
field and forest.

Sam Liu said...

Beautiful anaphora, and amazing poem indeed.

Rebecca said...

If you are true in your words, then this is the most lovely of all poetry. Who would not want to be loved for who they are and all that they are? It is what we all want and dream of. To change ourselves is to change what we believe in and what we stand for, but to be accepted and loved just as we are.... that is nothing but true beauty and something to treasure forever.

Peter said...

how true :)

Rebecca said...

Are you making fun of me for saying "true" so many times. Sorry aboot that. =p

Unknown said...

I love this one...the simplicity of being yourself and no one else and being loved for it. Nothing else needs to be said. Great write.